Much care was taken with our Sweet Gwendoline French Gin Valentine's Day slogan.
Instead of
"I'm Yours, You're Mine",
it's
"I'm Yours; Be Mine"
"BE Mine" is a request, a question, almost a plea.
Whereas "YOU'RE Mine" would be nonconsensual, demanding, and arbitrary.
It's a small change with a huge difference.
If you need carefully chosen words, call me. ideasmakemanifestos@gmail.com
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